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The Gates Of Heaven
Contributed by
Rylo
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:56:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As the gates of heaven opened wide
And the angels began to sing
I looked out my window
And new this is when my life will begin
I called upon the first angel
And asked for hope
Then I asked upon a second angel
And she told me to look down the slope
It was then, that I seen the light
Oh was it ever so bright
It was like daylight breaking in through the night
I had left my home , and headed towards that light
For I knew it was the only thing to do, that was right
It seemed that I had walked for miles, for there was no way to reach it
As bad as I wanted to, it would just seem to get further away.
I looked at the first angel, and asked
What am I suppose to do
For I need something new
She said just look and pray, to the Lord above
And he'll show you your new day,
Full of much love.
And he will hand you the key, to walk through life being happy.
He will take away all your pain
If you just call upon his name
As he will bless you with all of lifes greatest offers
And show you that life can be a lot softer.
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Rylo
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Re: The Gates Of Heaven
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by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:08:40 AM AEST
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| GREAT POEM. I AM READY TO GOOO... AS you opened the window i heard the angels and I saw the light. thanks. sandy |
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Re: The Gates Of Heaven
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:10:24 AM AEST
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Oh... Ron... this is great! Love it! What imagary you invoke with ur words... beautiful... beautiful!
~Donna~ |
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Re: The Gates Of Heaven
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:01:43 PM AEST
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beatiful write and the words are so true.. awesome job!! gives you a feeling of peace and beauty about heaven..
peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: The Gates Of Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 08:49:23 PM AEST
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Great love penned here. They sound like all the angels I met when I was sick. wasn't my time, but when it is I am not scared to go. I love this, Ron. You did an excellent job.
Rita |
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Re: The Gates Of Heaven
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:33:59 AM AEST
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Very beautifull, heavenly write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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