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Goodbye

Contributed by marsh62287 on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:21:09 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

im sorry girl
i cant play this game no more
your voice is never heard
you never say a word
isnt it absurd
that i can be so under
everyone else i the world
no friendship from you
that i have yet to see
you cant even love me
thats been so hardly seen
this pain has been erected
there is nothing here for me
every tear ive shed
just for you to see me
and maybe want to be around me
you have falsified
and lied to me
then just went on with ease
all i did was cry
and lose all faith alive
but never did i stop
this love i have for you
but never did u start
to see my truth alive
for what i really am
you never did take the time
just to get to know
so now i have to go
i still love you more than ever
but terrible pain
has sunken me
so now i must go
and say goodbye
to the one
that never got to know
just who i was
for what i mean
for everything i could be
in this world of love
you have sunken me

Copyright © marsh62287 ... [ 2004-04-15 00:21:09]
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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:12:53 AM AEST
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heart wrenching but I know the feeling very well.
don't give up hope in luv 'cause not everyone is this way. There's someone, somewhere 4 u that will lift up instead of beat u down.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy

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