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As The Tears keep Falling
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:10:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Just the thought of not being with you...
The thought of not being able to hold you tight...
Keeps the tears falling tonight
Flowing down like rain from my heart
That feels as though... it might break apart...
As it deeply aches for you
'Cause all the miles that separate us
Is killing me like a mid- October frost
I long to be by your side and I can't...
As the tears keep falling...
Dripping into the glassy pool at the edge of my heart
Shattering the stillness... the silence within
That ripples out to create...
An ear- splitting sound....
One of love... not of hate
"I LOVE YOU"
Can be heard being shouted...
Over and over... again and again...
From the rolling hills of Virginia to the rolling hills of Parke County
As the tears keep falling...
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2004-04-15 00:10:00]
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Re: As The Tears keep Falling
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by JennyFruFru on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:16:14 AM AEST
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| this is so touching... :) |
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Re: As The Tears keep Falling
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:45:52 AM AEST
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Jenny is right, this is extremely touching. Just keep shouting, as it will eventually reach his ear and maybe he will come.
Rita |
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Re: As The Tears keep Falling
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:25:50 AM AEST
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wow girl this is very moving!
One can feel the passion and pain.
luv,
yo momma,
emy |
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Re: As The Tears keep Falling
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:19:33 PM AEST
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| Donna, if you keep shouting, you're going to lose your voice. I'm sorry, I had to. LOL I thought was nicely written. Well done. Keep it up. *S* Cynthia |
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