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Existential Unavoid
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:28:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Hold this scorched earth
in your hand, Now
(see the life that has been, was.)
Strip this world
of cognizance, Now
(do it just because)
Sow this earth
with selfish thoughts, Now
(this buried core, humanity)
And starve this world
of all your love, Now
(you will NEVER see)
Marinade this earth
in Daughter's blood, Now
(a millenia of lies)
And throw this world
from your reach, Now
(this is all that i despise)
See this earth,
corrupt beauty, Now
(sadistically destroyed)
Be this world
in yourself, Now
(Existential Unavoid)
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2004-04-14 22:28:39]
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Re: Existential Unavoid
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:54:29 PM AEST
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simply brilliant:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Existential Unavoid
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:10:09 AM AEST
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| very well written, really good. dont really understand it much (blame lack of sleep. lol) , but still brill. keep t up. *hugs* luv phil xxx |
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Re: Existential Unavoid
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by MissLee on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:30:08 PM AEST
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| I always liked your poetry, but I see you have progressed much, this is meant as a compliment, not trying to be rude. |
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Re: Existential Unavoid
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:09:22 PM AEST
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Very interesting I enjoyed it.
Bobo (Joel) |
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