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With passion its lost
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:51:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dark fades into the light.
Pale skin with a cold touch.
Another reason for me to leave this place.
Bones break as the tempers flair.
With its passion its lost.
Creating this void was easy.
Filling it in seems to be the problem.
Screaming for release.
Will my wish ever be granted.
With its passion its lost.
Instincts predict this to be the end.
But what is the end to us.
The end of a love.
The end of time.
Or the end to all things lost.
With its passion its lost.
Blood sweeping across my face.
I reach for you.
You stand silent and ill.
I beckon on for you to move forward.
You laugh and step farther back.
With its passion its lost
Your words.
There salt to my wounds.
So I wept.
Now I think of the beggining.
This is the beggining.
The beggining of the end.
So with its passion it was lost.
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Mortis-Dark
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2004-04-14 20:51:43]
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Re: With passion its lost
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by fairy-of-ice on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:46:49 PM AEST
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| this is a very interesting poem, from what i understand, with a very thought provoking ending. i enjoyed reading it very much! |
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Re: With passion its lost
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by arden on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:00:56 PM AEST
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sad yet dark. i loved this. just so full of depth and emotion. greatly written. just amazing. well done
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Re: With passion its lost
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by Remy on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:16:35 PM AEST
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oi vey... touch stuff to deal! erg, nice poetic write, and yet it's very sad...
~Remy~ |
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Re: With passion its lost
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:46:00 PM AEST
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Hmmm, i dont neccessarily know exactly where it took me, but maybe if i read it again and again i'll find the answer to that. Great write, nonetheless.
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