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Are you Proud of Yourself?
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:20:03 PM in AEST
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She asks me if I’m proud of myself
Of course I answer no
I’d rather be dead than take the proud ness
For such a horrible reason
She says she’s ashamed of me
I agree to that
I’m ashamed of myself
As a matter of fact
I agree that I’m a *****y person
I treat her like *****
But I love her to death
She thinks I don’t appreciate her
And what she does for me
But I do and she just doesn’t see it
So I hide everything from sight
Cause I can’t express it right
So no one knows how I feel
Just how I act and talk
But how I act and talk are just uncontrollable pieces of attitude
That should be slashed and killed
And left forgotten forever
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2004-04-14 19:20:03]
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Re: Are you Proud of Yourself?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:26:28 PM AEST
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Can't you just kick the 'tude and tell her how you really feel and just be the real you that you want to be? Most people won't ever admit when they are wrong. It is a human frailty to accept we are wrong. This is an insightful write. Very well written.
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Re: Are you Proud of Yourself?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:13:35 AM AEST
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| wow an interesting point of view which is very well expressed. good write. |
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