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I Could've Been You
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:11:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i could've been you
if i were your age
in the current day
yes, you with the hair
in purposeful disarray
ring in one nostril
and ever so cautious
look in your eye
i feel your pain
not in precisely
the same way you do
but i've been on
the edge of terror before
and when all is
said and done
the fact remains i could've
been you (believe me, baby)
i know because i've been
where you have been
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faithmairee
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2004-04-14 19:11:39]
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Re: I Could've Been You
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:31:40 AM AEST
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| Wow great talent you have here! |
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Re: I Could've Been You
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by bernard on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:39:13 AM AEST
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Good strong poem, I like it.
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