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Lost
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:56:07 PM in AEST
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Rain outside reminds me of my past
I stretch out my hand to catch a few drops
I wish happy moments would last
Far more than just how long they are
Time erases traits and what I'm feeling
I only remember that it was good
Running, not to fall, when the world is spinning
I can never go back
I'm not the same person I used to be
I might've looked stupid
But i was satisfied just being me
Why did that ever change
I wish the clock froze for some time
So I could get a new breath
Cause while I'm fighting for what's mine
The rest gets hopelessly lost
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Re: Lost
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:40:58 PM AEST
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An emotional poem. I thought it was well constructed and it expressed your thoughts clearly.
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Re: Lost
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by morelikelyrics on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:14:40 PM AEST
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I think everybody has those moments that they could travel back in time, not only to correct their mistakes, or take advantage of lost oppotunites, but to relive happy moments that we so deadfully desire once again.
The trick is to leave the past behind, and go forth with our lives, and never make the same mistake, but make each day worth the trip, and each moment worth remembering...
And for you, this write is no mistake, nor is it something to go back in time and correct. This was lovely from every perspective, and inspired so much thought within my mind. You have also brought back so many memories... I can relate to this so well, and I hope that everyone can learn from it, and bring upon themselves happiness.
So wonderfully written...
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Re: Lost
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by Kirby on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 09:38:33 PM AEST
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| Everyone wishes that they could change the past at some point in time. This was a really great poem, I am going to go read some more of yours. Love:::Kirby |
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:02:32 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this, one thing i'm grateful about in the past is the mistakes i made (trust me there's a lot!) i feel i've learnt from them and they made me a better person (that's my opinion!) a very good write.
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