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The Apple and the Orange
Contributed by
Chade
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:44:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The apple and the orange make such a wonderful pair.
Sitting up in their tree, looking up at each other through the quaint breeze.
And when the wind blows, down they fall
In a whirling bustle of ripe plums.
And so they lay on the ground, side by side deciding how they would fly.
As they moved towards one another,
One gets picked up and the other gets harder.
And so passes the apple and the orange through their later years.
Until they meet again
At the bottom of a river bend.
Copyright ©
Chade
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2004-04-14 17:44:00]
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Re: The Apple and the Orange
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:09:02 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write, makes one want to hear the conversation at the rivers bend and all the comparrisons the two have to talk about. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: The Apple and the Orange
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:19:09 PM AEST
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| i dont know if you meant it this way but i kinda take it as a symbol of own lives... we meet at one point in our lives.. we disperce... with the only hope that we meet again... and once we have given up years later... we meet at the most unexpected time and place... good write :) cute :) |
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Re: The Apple and the Orange
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by dolly_dagger on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:29:07 PM AEST
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awww i like this 1. positive and cute :) it conveys a very peaceful and natural atmosphere.
dolly
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Re: The Apple and the Orange
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by sexy_spinks on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 03:43:42 PM AEST
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hey,
maybe i just cant see where this poem is going but is it literally just about an orange and an apple?! :s
im a little confussed
xXx
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Re: The Apple and the Orange
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 7th December 2014 @ 07:39:52 PM AEST
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| This was awesome and weird |
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