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Faces
Contributed by
parkman
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:06:02 PM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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Staring at the wall, the faces appear
Staring right back, them I fear
They're so twisted, grotesquely unpure
I feel so alone, I feel so insecure
They laugh at me, spit and swear
I shut my eyes but they're still there
Driving me mad, I want them to go
No matter how hard I try, they remain so
Still I stare, there's a mirror on the wall
The faces I fear, are my own, that is all
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2004-04-14 17:06:02]
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Re: Faces
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:51:00 PM AEST
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A very truthful poem.
I liked it alot and wished it were longer.
Enjoyed this one..
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Re: Faces
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by morelikelyrics on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:09:46 PM AEST
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I have to commend you, I have read many of your works, and everyone seems to capture me and I never cease to enjoy them. With simple words you can paint a perfect picture. Thats talent.
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Re: Faces
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:27:32 PM AEST
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The second line doesn't work for me, so I hope you change it, as it spoils what is otherwise a riveting, nightmarish poem. You are good at dark writes. Jermaine should take note.
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