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SoMeTHiNG LiKe SuiCiDe
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:29:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Feathery, leathery, slippery, sweet,
Death to me is a tasteless treat,
The ropes they burn when on the skin,
But what is much worse is this life I'm in.
Give me something to ease the pain,
Something that places my initials in rain,
A memory will do etched on the brain,
Enough agony to drive you insane.
When every tomorrow end up like today,
You continually end up the one to pay,
And no one can find the words that say,
But when I reach death there is someone that may.
Feverish temperatures under my feet,
This trek through life has left me in defeat,
So to my creator I am off to meet.
Copyright ©
strange_lindsey
... [
2004-04-14 15:29:20]
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Re: SoMeTHiNG LiKe SuiCiDe
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by abbzydude on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:32:50 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is a great write. i love the title too. The content is really good. |
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Re: SoMeTHiNG LiKe SuiCiDe
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:00:12 PM AEST
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This powerful write is seething with despair.
Exceptionatly written, Very well done.
Roses
Larry |
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Re: SoMeTHiNG LiKe SuiCiDe
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:05:27 PM AEST
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this is incredible.. good flow and rhythm.. nicely done :)
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: SoMeTHiNG LiKe SuiCiDe
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:26:01 PM AEST
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wow well done for the topic good word usage and the flow was brilliant
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Re: SoMeTHiNG LiKe SuiCiDe
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:58:55 PM AEST
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| In this library of the night, one has locked into his sight, words of one, who always writes. Beautifully, inspired, and craved by many. A favorite that one can not denie. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: SoMeTHiNG LiKe SuiCiDe
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by Cathy on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 09:48:02 AM AEST
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| This was a nice poem I hopw you dont feel like this you know so depressed i like your poems you express your feelings nice job. |
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