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Torn
Contributed by
IneedLove
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:27:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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If I could see through undemented eyes
Maybe I could see through the worlds great disguise
I could stop my blood from flowing
I could stop the depression from growing
My inability to keep a love
Comes as a curse from the Heavens above
My heart is screming "Die Today"
My mind is frantically trying to find the best way
Reality is starting to mix with dreams
I am already spliting at the seems
These salty tears dance down my face
And I feel like a complete waste of space
All the time I feel like ending everything
I worship no King
I am alone in a world so cold
With only a twisted reality to console.
Copyright ©
IneedLove
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2004-04-14 15:27:46]
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Re: Torn
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by abbzydude on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:29:21 PM AEST
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Really good. i loved the line 'These salty tears dance down my face' Great write!
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Re: Torn
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:08:32 PM AEST
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wow! you did a great job i love the line "Comes as a curse from the Heavens above" you did a great job kiip it up.................
**vamp**
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