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PReLuDe To a KiSS
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:22:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Battle scars deep, skin to bone
Lost in the darkness, feeling alone
Take a piece of the solution, to heart
From there you will know where it ends, and it starts.
Malice intent, prelude to a kiss
In a game of darts, you play hit or miss
Cosmic reaction, fireworks reach the sky
Chilled to the bone, in the blink of an eye.
The warmth of his body, pressed tight against mine
The weight of the judgement, you know is not fine
Sealed bag of remains, the casualty of love
You peer into the future, asking Heaven above.
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strange_lindsey
... [
2004-04-14 15:22:22]
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Re: PReLuDe To a KiSS
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:25:33 PM AEST
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| Wow, i really liked this, its very deep.Well done! |
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Re: PReLuDe To a KiSS
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:40:53 PM AEST
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oooo very moving poem, so full of feeling, beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: PReLuDe To a KiSS
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:50:18 PM AEST
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| Beautiful and the queston we all ask is, will this be the one to build upon, or is this goodbye no more to be found. Heaven only knows. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: PReLuDe To a KiSS
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by arden on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:02:52 PM AEST
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really awesome write. the flow was flawless. beautiful. well done, keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: PReLuDe To a KiSS
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:24:00 PM AEST
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| this is very beautiful, brilliant. another amazing write. i love your poems. *hugs* phil xxx |
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