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Dark Cloud
Contributed by
Dark_Cloud_
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:51:17 PM in AEST
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She sat on her bed, her homework spread across the blanket. She looked outside, and felt tears come to her eyes. As she saw it agin. And now she's died. But how di it happen. Nobody no's why. So....Let the thunder roar into the darkness and let you fright. As I tell of what happend on that bloody night. She saw it...as it came to th window. She ran for the door, but it was to late... A mass of balck. She ran to her bed and jumped under it to hide. But then she looked around and saw something red. And thats when she screamed because she found that was blood flowing from her head... and as she dies the dark cloud waited outside. to let the thunder roar. As the door closed....
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:53:31 PM AEST
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| oooooooo very descriptive....it's chilling... |
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Re: Dark Cloud
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by badboyzlover on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:06:22 PM AEST
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| ok kinda scary made chill run through me |
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