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O so cold
Contributed by
SAT
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:19:08 PM in AEST
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Her hands rapidly moving
the yarn changing form
into a colorful mitten
to match the other
the yarn so warm
so fuzzy and comfy
keeping my hands dry
from the cold wet snow
she told me they were mine
she looked in my eyes
and knew i was happy
making me mittens
was like her job or something
if i was the one who payed her
i would have payed her well too
she was always so happy
helping my hands
so i could play in the snow
but now her hands lie still
and my hands are O so cold
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Re: O so cold
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:30:47 PM AEST
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| loved the last two lines most..great poem. |
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Re: O so cold
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:08:25 PM AEST
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| this is sad... it starts off so cheerful and then it throws you for a loop at the end... :) nice write |
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Re: O so cold
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:23:01 PM AEST
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| good write. i like the twist at the end. |
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Re: O so cold
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:56:41 PM AEST
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An excellent poem filled with memories.
Touched my heart with this one...
Kie |
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Re: O so cold
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:07:07 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING YOU MISS! A CUTE LITTLE POEM!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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