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Truth
Contributed by
loopylou
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:26:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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truth and honesty walk together hand in hand
and both of them i so righteously command
i ask for your opinion
do you think i'm a poet
i really wanted you to say yes i am
but you told the truth
and proved you were a man
you said "poetry isn't one of your talents"
i thought my poetry was good but obviously you hadn't
but i can live with that
because i can live with you
not much harm can come when you tell the truth...
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-04-14 12:26:10]
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Re: Truth
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:41:50 PM AEST
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| this is the only thing i've read of yours yet..but i liked it..i think you did a really good job on that....i'm gonna read some more of your work. |
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Re: Truth
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:53:10 PM AEST
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Why did you put this in humourous. And hey ingnore what he said. This is poetry. Poetry isn't just rhyme and beautiful words. Poetry is many things and one of them include this poem, so that makes you a poet. Never give up!
Anne :D |
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Re: Truth
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:27:53 PM AEST
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Never let anyone keep you from writing poetry.
The more you write the higher you will climb. I think you are doing great, just hang in there. Okay?
Kie |
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Re: Truth
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by persia on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:06:56 PM AEST
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Interesting!
Truth iz a funny ting!
Persia |
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