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Scenes From The Battlefield
Contributed by
abbzydude
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:23:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Walking through the never ending field of fire,
Past the dried-blooded corpses,
For some, the end is near, and clearly in-sight,
For others, they will wait until the night,
To perish to the countries armed forces,
They see the hundreds of dead soldiers,riders and horses,
All lay like statues, upon the hard,cold, ground.
Still they walk through the battlefield, guns held high, they hear the sound,
Of soldiers crying out in their last breath, a final request, before their death.
'Tell my family i love them, i have fought to protect them and my country'
One more sacrifice, another thrown bitterly to their end,
Whose job was to fight,protect and defend..
Copyright ©
abbzydude
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2004-04-14 12:23:37]
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Re: Scenes From The Battlefield
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:29:27 PM AEST
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Good strong war poem its a pity that its the truth.
bernard |
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Re: Scenes From The Battlefield
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:31:53 PM AEST
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| wow this has real emotion...very powerfull. made me think.just like a poem should really. thankyou for shraing your views and experiances. |
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Re: Scenes From The Battlefield
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:54:47 PM AEST
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Wow, what a vivid poem. Makes me think of Wilfred Owen. Awesome poem, shows the cruelty of war!
Anne :D |
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Re: Scenes From The Battlefield
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:31:35 PM AEST
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| my goodness. sandy good write and wow you know. |
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