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I Never Wanted This
Contributed by
purplestary
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:39:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I never asked for money
I never wanted gold
I didn’t ask for much at all
And I didn’t want this pain.
I thought it would get better
I thought that you would care
But now I sit all alone
Wishing you were here
Now I see there is no time
None at all for me
So I will try to go on
And live a different life
How hard it’s going to get,
For me to leave you be
How my thoughts run back to you
How when I hurt I wish for you
To kiss it all away.
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2004-04-14 11:39:42]
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Re: I Never Wanted This
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:38:58 PM AEST
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| normally im a big fan of poems that rhyme(i think they please simple minds?lol)but i think writting it this way gets the emotion through stronger it doesent just roll of the tounge.man i know these feelings they are so hard too damn hard!!! i patically liked the line about how your thoughts all ways run back to him ive wrote many poems like this but i never really conqured this feeling as well as you did in your poem. anyways i think this is good |
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Re: I Never Wanted This
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:15:15 PM AEST
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| This is such a touching write. I can tell you poured your heart and soul into this. Keep penning. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: I Never Wanted This
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 20th August 2020 @ 11:00:10 PM AEST
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Very sad but relatable just the same.
Any loss can be devastating...
A great first write... |
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