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Freedom
Contributed by
ESM
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:38:29 AM in AEST
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Freedom means liberation to me
To be free on land and sea
Freedom is like a tall tree
That is free in our country
Freedom is vital in our lives
And is better than using our knives
Freedom needs responsibility
To make our lives a tranquillity
Freedom is a kingdom
With a lot of wisdom
People must be freed
Because it is a need
Freedom is pure
And it can cure
It helps our mind
And all human kind
No one will be hated
If they are emancipated
No one is a slave
To command and behave
To share and forgive
And let others live
It is a cord of unity
So we all live happily
Copyright ©
ESM
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2004-04-14 11:38:29]
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Re: Freedom
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:51:28 AM AEST
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| I like this poem because you are showing your pride for this country.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Freedom
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:43:20 PM AEST
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| wow you describe i such a simple way a perfect world i love this idea |
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Re: Freedom
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:56:07 PM AEST
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Wonderful description! Loved the rhyme. Very well written!
Anne :D |
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