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This Boy
Contributed by
Bamm
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:17:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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I know this boy, who drives me wild.
I love his mind, his body, and his style.
Oh, how this boy makes me feel?
Well, let's just say it's beyond unreal.
His chocolaty, smooth, perfect skin,
brings something out of me that was deep within.
I know this boy, who's oh so sweet.
So sweet you'll get a cavity the first time you meet.
His voice seductive, his eyes hypnotizing.
There's something about this boy that gets my temperature rising.
It's hard to describe this boy with words.
Not because he's sexy but because you don't know where to start first.
I know this boy, who's everything I need.
Strong, sensitive, and loves to please.
I love this boy, like I love myself.
And I'll always love him through sickness and in health.
This boy, this boy. He doesn't know what he does to me.
He's got me wrapped around his finger most definitely.
I'll always love this boy till the end of time.
But I sure can't wait till I make this boy mine.
Now see, I bet you thought I already had this boy in my hand.
Nope, sadly to say this boy and I are just friends.
Copyright ©
Bamm
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2004-04-14 11:17:57]
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Re: This Boy
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:21:47 AM AEST
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this is really good. I no the feeling that you hold very well (but for a girl).
Chade |
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Re: This Boy
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:24:15 AM AEST
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This poem is something I can relate to, cause me and this boy are just friends, but I like him so bad.
Your poem is very good and I will rate your poem as well. Keep up the good work.-luckycharm. |
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Re: This Boy
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by tiny_mo on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:25:32 AM AEST
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| This poem is great. I thought she actually had the guy. SO romantic I love it. Keep writing. |
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Re: This Boy
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:51:25 PM AEST
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| ooh this is very sad but i loved the suprsing twist your words just strung along so well i really liked this |
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