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Sail the seas
Contributed by
luckycharm
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:07:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Heal this soul of mine,
Calm all the fears inside,
And as things slip away,
Let me sleep the night away,
The shadows on the wall,
The endless call,
Of someone who won't leave me,
Alone in happiness and peace,
Trapped inside,
Where there's no where to hide,
The rays of the beaming sun,
Shine down and turn into one,
And the freezing cold,
Won't help me unfold,
My heart back into place,
Will never erase,
The doubts and fears,
The many tears,
I need to be so free,
So I'll sail the seas,
I'll leave this life behind,
And take my time,
To find myself a better way,
Instead of trying to run away,
From things I don't wan't to hear,
Maybe it's still fear,
Which lives inside of me,
Or something that won't let me breathe,
The doubts and fears,
The many tears,
I need to be so free,
So I'll sail the seas
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Re: Sail the seas
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by waos on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:56:42 PM AEST
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| Pamela, I like this one too!! You are a really good writer! |
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Re: Sail the seas
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:42:09 PM AEST
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Pam... another great write. I love your style. I like how it's more like a conversation filled with thoughts then like a structured poem. And it like how it rhymes, even though it's messy. Thats awesome
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Re: Sail the seas
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by eviegirl on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:00:51 PM AEST
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| Another really good poem. I love the thoughts it portrays. |
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