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sea of dreams
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:54:31 AM in AEST
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~Eagle Sigs~
i would give everything i own,
give up my heart, mind, life, soul, home,
just to be with you again; see your smile,
hear your laughter, even if but for a while,
since you died and gone on nothings the same,
you are a warm breath of spring during cold frost,
whilst i am hangin' here at times by this fraying rope,
i am caught up in some yesterdays feeling of hope,
deep inside of me i feel you are always here with me,
since first we met i knew, i would always love you true,
no other love has ever compared, come close, or dared,
to touch the flame of never ending sweet love we shared,
for to me you are; as crystal diamonds upon the snow,
endless winds that freshly blow, gentle falling rains,
you are my hope restored within me again and again,
my heart's sweet uplifting rush; mornings whispered hush,
mountain stars shining brightly at night, little birdling in flight,
evenings, and so many times i wish you could still hold me tight,
you are never gone, for you are with me like a beautiful song,
on wings of love you come to me; from beyond my sea of dreams,
i hear the beat of your heart, when this forest becomes dark.
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Re: sea of dreams
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:00:56 AM AEST
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I felt a deep sadness while reading this poem, A true love never dies one day you will reunite and be a family again. My deepest feelings of sympathy go out to you and yours. Guard your precious memories until such a time. Deep in your heart is the strongest safe that ever was made.
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:01:41 AM AEST
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Your poem brought tears to my eyes. I am deeply sorry for your loss. I could feel the pain emitting from this poem. Yet you found beautiful words to remember a husband you loved deeply.
Another masterpiece Nessa.
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:07:28 AM AEST
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I have tears in my eyes my dear, sweet Nessa. This is so heartbreaking and I don't even know what to say to you. I am here for you always. ((((((((((((((((((nessa))))))))))))))))))
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:13:58 AM AEST
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the poem was splendid and the picture topped it off beautifuly you express so much with your poetry nessa i love your work
KISS KISS
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by Aika on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:23:10 PM AEST
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| so sorry for your loss !:-(( but amazing write!! I love it!!§ with all my love, aika:-) |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:25:42 PM AEST
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Nessa, this is so filled with longing, hurt and passion for him. Exquisitely beautiful topped off with the perfection of the haunting picture. You bare your soul for us to see what true love can really be. I too am so sorry for your loss. He is with you all the time and you will be together again.
Love and gentle hugs,
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:21:27 PM AEST
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| awww vanessa i am so sorry for you lost... you are such a sweet lady that its ashame that such sorrow was brought into your life. but remember that you still have ur children and that you were blessed with them to enable you to remmber the good times and not the bad. im sure he is looking down from heaven smiling rays of sunshine onto you and your family and is very proud of you and the work you have written in his honor.. :) |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:35:19 PM AEST
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Awwww Ness....((((((hugs)))))) This is so touching... I know how much you must miss him but I also know he's with you always....
Beautifully touching....
Love and hugs.....
Jenni |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:44:20 PM AEST
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You Did It!!!!! You got the bloody pictures up! wahoooo lol. This poem is so beautiful and so sad, it flows perfectly and the pic you chose is so cute!
Love 'n Big Hugs
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:00:31 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa what a heart tearing poem! I'm so sorry to hear this! The poem is a master piece! It radiates sadness. The imagery is stunning! Awesome write!
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by badlander on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:17:43 PM AEST
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Poem after poem after poem after poem,as usual VERY ELEGANT, BEAUTIFUL, TOUCHING. Thank you for your soul.
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by Angelic_Demon on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:23:46 PM AEST
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Aww mom... I love it. *munching on chocolate* Kind've sad though... but none the less, great write...
Mars
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:44:43 PM AEST
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Awww Nessa, I just cried some of the sweetest tears. I am so sorry for your loss, truely I am...but the beauty of your words is a gift to us all. And I know he's there smiling right now. Phenominal write Nessa, absolutely incredible.
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:18:30 PM AEST
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| What a tear jerker this was but I needed the cry! My best to you Nessa! Christina |
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:06:45 PM AEST
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oh Nessa this made me cry - a beautiful poem and so very sad - I know you loved your Dave so very much because when you talk about him there is that special note in your voice and in your words - someday my friend we will all be reunited with the ones we love - someday - but until then he would want you to be strong and happy -
hugs for my sis
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 09:04:23 PM AEST
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| Nessa, I am so sorry for your loss. My heart goes out to you. :o( This brought tears to my eyes. God will reunite the both of you and your sadness will be gone. *S* Cynthia |
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:25:34 PM AEST
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I guess we all only know what we don't or can't have until we don't or can't have it...this is a pictue of those feelings so sensitivly portrayed.
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:59:38 PM AEST
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How nice of you to write such a heart moving real love poem..it has moistioned my eyes seeing such a great love in your heart..
Dear Nessa..truly this is my favorite poem of yours..sooo beautifully written..just I am melting. I love this my dearest friend. venkat. |
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:11:36 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa This Is So Sad I'm So Sorry For Your Loss.....It Brung Tears To My Eyes...
A Very Touching Heartfelt Write...
Love You In The Lord Nessa And God Bless..
[[[[[[[[ Nessa ]]]]]]]]
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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by Vickie on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:09:43 AM AEST
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| im so sorry for your loss sweet sista!!! this is my first day here and already i cant leave!! keep up the good work...u got skills!! |
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by Bongo on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:33:48 AM AEST
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Loving thoughts from the past
They will always last
Best wishes |
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:54:50 AM AEST
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| oh ness. i want to tell you how i feel but i just don't know how. this is so incredibly beautiful, and so sad...my favourite piece of yours...wow...so amazing xxx |
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:43:58 PM AEST
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oh nessa.. this is beautiful.. im sure he would adore this.. so beautiful..
charlotte x_x_x |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:13:45 PM AEST
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so sad but so brilliant...
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:02:31 PM AEST
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| woa, now this was awesome...sad, but awesome none the less and we both know i suck at giving comments, ha...but hey, its the thought not the quality that counts right? ok ill be quiet now - your friend |
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:07:58 AM AEST
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Nessa each word is full of longing and a deep loss but filled with love for him. This kind of love never dies sweetheart and you will all be together again. Im sorry that you did lose him. I admire your beauty your power and strength Nessa. Iv got tears streaming down my cheeks this moved me.
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:24:28 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa,
this is sad but beautifull..You r so brame to keep on keeping on after losing him. I really admire your strength and comfort u give to all.
You are a good friend and great poet.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:29:32 AM AEST
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What can I say? Words fall short for this poem. Beautiful, heart-breaking and comforting at the same time. Stunning masterpiece!
Hugs and peace to you!
Hur |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:39:38 PM AEST
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Always the last to respond.
This poem was so touching! It didn't make me cry,it left a longing in my heart, and my husband is still alive. that is. But it made me think of all the 22 years we spent together.Good times and bad. Ok now I'm crying. lil lol.
My heart bleeds for such a beautiful poetess who is grand beyond her pen!
{{{{{{Nessa}}}}}}
Angel always...godspeed,myfriend...Joni |
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by Missy_7290 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:57:49 PM AEST
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| I am very sorry that this happened.But this poem is a great way to express the way you feel about this whole situation.It was sad and great @ the same times. |
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:05:02 PM AEST
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Two songs came to mind when I read your poem and I thought this quote from one of them would be appropriate.
"When life seems not worth living
and troulbe seems to be at your side
the love that I have will be freeing
and change your dakness to light
I-I will be right by your side
when you need me
when the world is falling in
and no one seems to care
you can depend on me"
Quote from "You can depend on me" by Smokey Robinson
The memories of loved ones help us to carry on even after they are gone. For me it is the memories I have of listening to music with my dad that keeps his memories alive and lets me know that he loved me. You have a great poem here.
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