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Within the Grasp of Hopelesness
Contributed by
liquidchaos
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:31:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It is a fateful Tuesday.
Anything I touch crumbles to dust.
Hiding within the safety of the darkness,
I am consoled only by my deepest fears.
My companions thus far and forevermore.
Is it paranoia causing this immense disturbance?
Or is there something more lurking here?
An entity I have yet to understand?
This night holds only deep shadows.
Unique and eerie.
Are these unknowns the cause?
Or merely inventions meant to take the blame?
They move—just out of minds grasp.
The air becomes rent by a shattering burst of sound.
Forlorn.
Angry.
Powerful.
Permeating every iota of thought.
And now—these silent screams
Having reached a crescendo,
Swirl shivers like horseflies
On a battlefield
Littered with blood and body parts.
These possessing thoughts of hopelessness secure their grasp—
And welcome me within these cool walls of consciousness.
Goodbye cruel world.
Copyright ©
liquidchaos
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2004-04-14 10:31:16]
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Re: Within the Grasp of Hopelesness
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:34:17 AM AEST
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wow, dark but cool poetry. Thats really good. The last line 'goodbye crule world' just some it up somes up some parts of life as well. Well done
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Re: Within the Grasp of Hopelesness
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:52:32 AM AEST
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Chaos is the basis of all life. Your poem is a good example of chaos being put to word. Good strong poem.
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Re: Within the Grasp of Hopelesness
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:16:52 PM AEST
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very interesting got better with each line.
Bobo (Joel)
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Re: Within the Grasp of Hopelesness
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 09:01:56 PM AEST
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| i know i'm repeating someone else, but this poem was cool |
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