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Forgiveness
Contributed by
mercedes
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:24:05 AM in AEST
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ApologyPoetry
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How do you ask for forgiveness
How do you say you are sorry
How do you mend a friendship
When all you wanted was attention
How do you say you were selfish
Always though of your problems first
How do you fix the lies you told
When you don’t know the difference
How do you say you miss someone
The talks, the tears, the laughter
How do you go about this
Without asking for more attention
Look at me, see me here
On my knees, kiss your feet
Words cannot portray my true feelings
When all I wish for is a true friend
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2004-04-14 10:24:05]
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Re: Forgiveness
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by LiquidChaos on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:45:41 AM AEST
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oh yes. i feel just like this at the moment. and i have no answer. but keep writing...i will continue to read lol....great write!
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Re: Forgiveness
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:56:19 AM AEST
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Damn girl, you ripped these words right out of my heart. I felt this one, big time, and I know JUST how you feel.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Forgiveness
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:52:50 PM AEST
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| If those eyes are like these words, forgiveness is already there. Thanks for sharing. Hope they read these words, or feel the intent. |
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Re: Forgiveness
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:44:57 AM AEST
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| Makes me wonder sometimes, why do we try, when nothing is returned. Great write. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Forgiveness
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:39:22 PM AEST
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Perfect words as they reflect every thought I have now.
Good job. |
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