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Contributed by silvermystic105 on Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I don't feel like i know you anymore.
Wrapped up in your own emotions
And that little crowd you call your world.
Dressing your life up in denim and leather and
Denying it the right to wear the sweatpants
And the tshirts you sent packing
That you were once so familiar with.
And when you talk
Your eyes are so empty
You smile is so plastic
Showing how meaningless all your words really are.
Try to win me over with the things you now have
Like your guitar, and your music videos,
And your band CDs, and your many fans
Instead of your wonderful smile,
And your bright blue eyes,
And the cute way you lit your cigarette:
The little things that drove me towards you
The first time i met you.
And the beautiful person you once were
Is now lost in the ugly depths of your new lifestyle.
And you start to judge me
Say i don't fit your mold
Say i don't know your world well enough
When six months ago we lived in the same world
Where we shared the same interests
The same laughter
The same sadness
And you understood me.
When your eyes were always fixated to me
And you couldn't believe you met me.
When we would sit for hours smoking cigarettes
And drinking beer
And telling each other our life stories.
When i never thought you would be the one
To leave permanent scars
And emotional bruises
And damages to my self-esteem.
But you were.
But you are.
And you made me cry a little,
You made me feel worthless,
And you made me die a little inside.
I don't believe anything will change you back
I see no glimpse of salvation
So i don't talk to you
I don't write to you.
But i think about you
And realise
I don't feel like i know you anymore.

Copyright © silvermystic105 ... [ 2002-09-26 20:00:00]
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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 06:55:31 AM AEST
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This is sad...and well written...

Lasca

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