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Limerick #9 (My Eyeball)
Contributed by
norm
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:21:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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I wish to report an event.
I went to a retinal gent.
He took him a peek,
He discovered a leak,
A ZAP with a laser, he sent.
Like a man from the Rio Grande
I guess you might know about land,
You may ride you a horse,
You may even key 'Morse'
But an eyeball, you don't understand.
Copyright ©
norm
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Re: Limerick #9 (My Eyeball)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:40:07 AM AEST (User
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Laughingggggggggggggggg!
"An ode to an eyeball"
You write the wittiest, most unique writes i've ever seen.
I now dub thee the king of the limericks...
Kie :O) |
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Re: Limerick #9 (My Eyeball)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:50:19 AM AEST (User
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Glaucoma? I'll say a prayer for you Norm. As always, a delightful read.
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Re: Limerick #9 (My Eyeball)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:17:46 AM AEST (User
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excerlent. that was really cool. Thanx for cheering me up :)
Chade |
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Re: Limerick #9 (My Eyeball)
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:58:41 PM AEST (User
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LMBO
this is great
putteragain
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Re: Limerick #9 (My Eyeball)
(User Rating: 1 ) by morelikelyrics on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:40:59 PM AEST (User
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what?...
*thinks*
ohhhh!!!
*laughs*
hahaha, I get it now...
*steps back into shadows, embarassed*
(ummm, takes me time to get these things)
anyways, i enjoyed it, very witty!
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: Limerick #9 (My Eyeball)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:05:22 PM AEST (User
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i agree with kie. =] |
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