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NocturnNocturne
Contributed by
spike
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:10:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A velvet kiss upon my lips
And you blend into the night
You smile once, in the darkness,
To set my dreams alight.
We loved for what seemed a lifetime
Beneath a gibbous moon,
Our bodies entwined in deep embrace
That made my spirit swoon.
I thought I was your succubus
Your lust I was to draw,
But instead you were my incubus
And left me craving more.
Did it really happen?
Was the union true
Or congressus subtilis,
A dream I had of you.
The white of your smile
The touch of your lips,
The warmth of your breath
And the thrust of your hips
- Gone, but not forgotten.
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spike
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2004-04-14 08:10:13]
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Re: NocturnNocturne
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:16:42 AM AEST
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Another great poem has left your pen Spike you have a wonderful way with words keep em coming !
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Re: NocturnNocturne
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:19:47 AM AEST
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Pretty and sensuous are the first things that came to my mind upon reading this. Stellar write, especially this verse:
I thought I was your succubus
Your lust I was to draw,
But instead you were my incubus
And left me craving more.
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Re: NocturnNocturne
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 09:11:31 AM AEST
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I think in life wwe all know that feeling.
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Re: NocturnNocturne
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:22:19 PM AEST
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| beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: NocturnNocturne
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by Bunni on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:39:56 PM AEST
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| My favorite line was the last one; it didn't rhyme, and it was the perfect ending. |
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Re: NocturnNocturne
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:51:32 PM AEST
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You sure have a beautiful way with words when it comes to love ..... :o)
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Re: NocturnNocturne
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by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:23:22 PM AEST
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| you are most certainly a most unbelievably wonderful poet spike. i love this one, the reference to incubus and sucubus were so elegant and beutiful... |
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Re: NocturnNocturne
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:41:19 AM AEST
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Enticing and . . . eerily seductive.
I much enjoyed reading through this.
Keep writing. |
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