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Reflection of Evanscence
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:43:14 AM in AEST
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Staring into this mirror, looking for so long
Contemplation, obsession, singing from a different song
Broken shards to smash and shatter where my soul is kept
Voices scream in solemn silence where my soul once slept
Watching where young moonlight sits, dancing on my face
Losing feeling in my dreams, whispers call from every place
My reflection stares so deep within, can you tell apart
Ones an adult, one a child, opposites connected by a heart
Gentle whispers call to me, but i just cant seem to hear
My inner childs staring at me, calling out in fear
Ill bleed for my inner me,
Ill die by you, to set me free
Staring at this mirror, looking for to long
Calling out in solemn silence, changing my last song
Broken shards to tell me my lifes mine to keep forever
Take my child, keep him safe, this is your endeavour
Goodbye myself, im leaving you, reflections hurt to much
My soul and I, we need to be, were lost and out of touch
Ill be back, with you someday, but now i need to be
This mirrors left, within my soul, an evanescent me
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forever_lonely
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Re: Reflection of Evanscence
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:56:36 AM AEST
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| Wow. First off, I have to say, well done for crafting a great poem out of a oft-penned but interesting subject. Second, excellent choice of words and rhyming. Third, this piece is able to invoke a lot of emotion and thought. Fourth, you rock. Take care. ;) |
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Re: Reflection of Evanscence
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:34:46 AM AEST
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You are a natural born story teller.
You certainly have the gift of placing thoughts into poems that speak volumes in regards to your depth.
I read your poems and I envy your talent. Yet at the same time I am gloriously happy that you are blessed.
Very impressive...
Kie |
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Re: Reflection of Evanscence
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:29:04 AM AEST
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drops pen to the floor.....
Each time you post I learn another lesson in how a poet should write.
Humbled
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Re: Reflection of Evanscence
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:21:48 PM AEST
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ohhh luke, this is enchantingly hauntingly beautiful, serene yet so full of innner turmoil, a brilliant poem:) hugs n' love nessa x
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Re: Reflection of Evanscence
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:04:35 PM AEST
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What an impressing poem! I see you haven't lost your brilliant touch! An amazing poem filled with vivid imagery. Stunning ending. Loved it! A master piece!
Anne :D |
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Re: Reflection of Evanscence
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:13:53 AM AEST
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*attempts to pick up jaw from floor*
You have done it again Luke. You've really become a master in the art of rhyme, and it shows here better than ever. Everything just fits together so well...
You have taken a simple subject and breathed new life into it, crafting a poem of both style and deep substance. Exceptional work, a stand-out piece indeed.
Truly,
-Dan |
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Re: Reflection of Evanscence
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by morelikelyrics on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:03:10 PM AEST
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So much emotion and beautiful progression...
Yes, natural and obvious talented you hold now, clearly shown by this wonderful write!
Well, well, well, (stressing "well") done!!
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: Reflection of Evanscence
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:22:49 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem Truly brilliant. I learn new things everytime I read your poems. |
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Re: Reflection of Evanscence
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:19:50 PM AEST
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Luke, again...I am in awe of your absolute talent. The words are so devine. Perfection!
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