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stay strong
Contributed by
shawn87005
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:40:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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i know he's gone
and tears will fall
but now he's gone
beyond heaven's wall
i know it's hard
to hide the pain and sadness
times like this
just seems like madness
so just stay strong
i know it's tough
but things get better
after things get rough
it's hard to accept the reality
that such a good man is gone
but just remember he's watching
as he kneels down beside god's throne
i know it's hard to stay positive
at times like this
he was just one of those people
that everyone will miss
just dry up those tears
it's what he'd want you to do
and remember we're here
and we all love you
Copyright ©
shawn87005
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2004-04-14 00:40:17]
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Re: stay strong
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:59:26 AM AEST
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I lost a dear aunt last year from cancer that I felt this way about. I wanted her out of the pain but there was a part of me that didn't want to let go of her physical presence. It is so difficult to lose anyone but when it is someone you love, admire and respect, it is even more difficult. I know she wants me to go on and live but it is hard to think of her and not be able to call or go see her. I know your feelings here and I can sympathize with them. It is hard. He would be very proud of you for this write. He is with you everyday watching over you. Our loved ones always do from heaven.
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Re: stay strong
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:39:07 AM AEST
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I loved your postive outlook on this one...cuz I'm sure that's what he'd want for you... I have lost many loved ones... and I know it's painful..but once you keep them alive inside your heart, it becomes easier to deal with...
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Re: stay strong
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 05:20:22 AM AEST
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| I can relate completely to this for I lost someone very dear to me last year. Beautiful write, well done and take care. |
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Re: stay strong
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:59:20 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful loving tribute to a man so much loved, very well written, im sorry for your loss, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: stay strong
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by eternal_sorrows on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:31:31 AM AEST
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| My heart to yours and your family. Wishing you a gentle healing. |
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