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Face
Contributed by
shawn87005
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Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:22:02 AM in AEST
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who wants to be without a face
never fit in
no matter the place
that would be
a sad sad life
full of tears
full of strife
to live your life
and have no one to notice
you can't go on
you're losing your focus
your grip on life
begins to fade away
as you place the blade to your wrist
prepared to make this...your last day
you see this light...as you hear these words
i am your lord...i am your face
let me live in your heart
i have you a place
Copyright ©
shawn87005
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2004-04-14 00:22:02]
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Re: Face
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by niki on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:44:20 AM AEST
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another great write keep it up
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Re: Face
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:29:06 AM AEST
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| Your poem sounds as if you are going through a depressive phase. I hope that this is not the case. If it is get proffesional help. There is no disgrace in getting help many people at one time or another in their lives need and ask for help. some-one is always there to respond to whatever problems you may have.Try to keep smiling from bernard. |
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