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Last Of Breath
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:42:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sweetest of suicides
The loneliest of heart
The Tragic of knowledge
Before his last of breaths
The truthfulness of love
As her first of breath of awake
She watches her one as he fades
Within his last of breath
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If only people were different
If only they could consent
To the difference that was meant
Life could go on without so much violence
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The sweetest of truth
The truest of love
Tragicly lost in the hour
Just because...
The tradgedies of home
Is the bitterness of tongue
Where in the story no one's alone
Yet, still on the hour every bell has rung
**
If only people were the same
If only thing could change
Things could be on a higher plain
Instead of in the last of breaths in pain
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-04-13 21:42:02]
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Re: Last Of Breath
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:09:47 PM AEST
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U did an excellent job writing this!
luv, huggs, hope,
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Re: Last Of Breath
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:53:06 PM AEST
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Wow...this is awesome!!!! Really good write... and quite meaningful....
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