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Winter Blues
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:16:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Depression sets in,
as the cold wind
blows outside my window,
the storm
beats down hard.
As I gaze out
the window,
I watch the
storm clouds being
blown around.
It's too cold
to go outside,
I watch the
snowplows getting rid
of the snow,
that the storm
has piled up on the streets.
There's nowhere to go,
nothing to do,
as I watch the
snow fall outside my window.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.28/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-04-13 21:16:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Winter Blues
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:33:14 PM AEST (User
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good work and thank God for Spring.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Winter Blues
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:36:30 PM AEST (User
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sometimes depression knows no season, this write is all to familiar in that regard... great poetry! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Winter Blues
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:13:49 PM AEST (User
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very peaceful, im just the opposite tho, weather most others feel is bad brightens my day, today we were in mists and clouds all day with that romantic rain, and its the best day ive had in weeks, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Winter Blues
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:15:19 PM AEST (User
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What a chilling poem! *brrr* Depression is a terrible feeling! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Winter Blues
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:54:50 PM AEST (User
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how true... thank god summer is coming soon. this was very well written. i enjoyed it, keep it up.
Arden |
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