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Just Another Poem
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:10:04 PM in AEST
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This is just another poem,
like the ones you've read before,
nothing different, just the title,
so its really quiet a bore.
To tell of my love life,
and the way that it has slowly died,
and turned my soul into hate,
slowly rotting away inside.
To tell you of the trust,
a trust that was abused,
by friends and family all alike,
oh, how I feel so used.
To tell you of my suicide,
how depressing that must sound,
to hear how i'm torturing myself,
waiting for my body to be found.
To tell you of my happiness,
would seem like such a dream,
but all I have left is sadness,
and blood thats so un-clean.
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nail-to-the-head
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2004-04-13 21:10:04]
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Re: Just Another Poem
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:12:31 PM AEST
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almost seems as if you don't want to tell anything at all... curious little write, bipolar as it may seem! good stuff... ;0)
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Re: Just Another Poem
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by cheech on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:14:11 PM AEST
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i'm glad this is poetry and hopefully not real life action,please don't think about suicide,it seems like you've been betrayed by a loved one or a real close friend,don't worry things will get better,i liked this poem alot great work keep it up!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Just Another Poem
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:21:27 PM AEST
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Nicely written,
And I heard something being said.
Matters not what people understand coming out of your head. As long as they believe there's and answer or question they can find what they want to see.
Either way I enjoyed reading your words and hearing you pain. god bless you. take care. Things will clear and settle down, good luck. |
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