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Blurred
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:03:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Blurred
My lifes a wreck.
Im afraid you'll leave me when im gone.
I live with regrets.
Those I cannot forget.
Why do I bother.
You'll never come out to see the light.
Your stuck,
stuck in your fashion and your ways.
Never to regain another day.
When im gone.
I'll be afraid to come back home.
But we'll be on the outside.
Staring in.
Hoping for you to come outside.
Your bringing me to my knee's.
All those times I begged in vain.
Its all Blurred.
I feel insecure about my life.
I wish I could leave my burdens at the door.
But I cant let go.
Tumult covers my body.
Rushing every narrow entry.
But I waste.
Every second.
Only time passes.
Stars shine, burn, die and live again.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
... [
2004-04-13 21:03:17]
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Re: Blurred
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:16:11 PM AEST
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the theme of this is oh so familiar... strange, i used that blurred analogy elsewhere the other day... great write! ;0)
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Re: Blurred
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by arden on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:03:39 PM AEST
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this is really sad , a very deep write.
keep it up you have a great talent.
Arden |
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