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Just A Reject
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:56:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The cracks in the wall start to cry,
crying red blood that will not dry,
the wall is my soul,
a soul that can't heal,
my heart has been broken,
you broke the seal,
I build up my barriers to keep you out,
a reject of society without a doubt,
now just a face in the crowd, without a name,
I hide in away in fear, and full of shame,
pushed out of the picture, and trampled to the ground,
the happiness of love is never to be found.
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nail-to-the-head
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2004-04-13 20:56:11]
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Re: Just A Reject
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by lonely_kakashi on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:02:32 PM AEST
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moving...about the only word that comes to mind.
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Re: Just A Reject
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:18:11 PM AEST
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i would suggest some closure, you can't exactly pin rejection on one person... sounds like you're doing that, though i might be wrong... nice poetic writing! ;0)
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Re: Just A Reject
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by Arius-Inues on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:18:15 PM AEST
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wow also comes to mind, great wright!
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Re: Just A Reject
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:45:10 AM AEST
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| nice write... though a little bitter. |
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Re: Just A Reject
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:03:10 PM AEST
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| I think the poem explores the idea of rejection pretty well, true feelings in a poem! |
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