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You were my Everything
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:46:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How can I explain how you make me feel,
Theres no explenation,
You bring me sunshine in my stormy rain,
Break through my storm clouds,
Every time your near I forget,
Let all cares wash away,
Your my heaven and earth,
Filling my soul,
All one could ever need,
Your my everything,
I won't live here without you,
Life can't go on,
You make me feel better about myself,
Nothing I could ever do,
Hold back my tears as you let go,
Now its over,
You were my everything,
My sun and moon,
I cherished you deep down in my heart,
Now broken and dead,
This is my newly found fate,
I'll hide till then,
Shut out as a nothing,
A nobody,
Shur you don't care any more,
Neither do I,
I gave you my life and you wasted it,
Taken for granted,
You took my soul and wasted it,
What was it all worth,
The kissing and holding,
Only my life,
I'll be seeing you now,
Not for a while,
Bury my body deep down in the ground,
Away from it all,
I gave you my heart but it was no use,
No longer loveing,
I'm tierd and lonley and just out of love,
Goodbye my love,
You tore me up and threw me away,
I'm never comeing back,
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-04-13 20:46:05]
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Re: You were my Everything
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by Chrissylee on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:59:12 PM AEST
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firstly let me say great write, the hurts of love come through greatly and strongly in your poem.
secondly let me say never give up i have been down the same road before but look at me now i have found the greatest love i could have ever dreamed to have and now my heart is on high for ever more. |
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Re: You were my Everything
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by lonely_kakashi on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:28:19 PM AEST
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knowing how you feel on this subject...and iv bn feeling this way for a year!
:D
Kakashi |
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Re: You were my Everything
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:28:37 PM AEST
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you need not come back to that old flame, but remember to come back to love! it's worth your time, but for now you can focus on YOU... hope your days are brighter soon! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: You were my Everything
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:45:33 AM AEST
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| I feel what you are saying, cause I know it hurts on the inside, but you have to listen to your pride and the things inside of your heart.-luckycharm. |
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