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Days Past
Contributed by
JadedExistence
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:33:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Forgotten dreams
At the bottom of shallow streams
Whispers of days long past
Memories of happiness that could never last
Recalling the bliss of innocence lost
Fearless and free, not knowing the cost
Laughter floating through the air
Unseen children dancing there
Candy covered lips and a pouting face
Frilly little dresses, made with lace
Looking up at the sky, stars shining bright
Eyes sparkling in early morning light
Saying your prayers every night in bed
Then upon your pillow, you lay your head
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Re: Days Past
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:34:27 PM AEST
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The imagery in this poem had me reaching for laughter in the sky and picturing children dancing there.
Very impressive!
Wow is all I can say..
Kie |
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Re: Days Past
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:20:29 AM AEST
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awesome a beautiful poem I liked the first stanza the best.
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Re: Days Past
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:25:18 PM AEST
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Awesome poem filled with vivid imagery! Enjoyed reading this one!
Anne :D |
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Re: Days Past
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 08:48:44 AM AEST
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| wow, this paints a great visual. this is a great write. i love the words anf the flow. everything. brilliant. *hugs* phil xxx |
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