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Kleptomaniac.. For She Stole My Heart
Contributed by
Queen_Dolly
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:54:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Gracefully She entered the ballroom
In Her magnificent gown
Encrusted with sapphires in velvet
Her sparkling silver crown
I took Her hand in offer of dance
Thus began to form a Gothic Romance
Her anaemic hand She placed in mine
Our scar dowsed bodies began to entwine
She placed a single red rose in my mouth
Thorns stuck in She snatched it out
A bead of blood dripped to my chest
She licked it off and left the rest
Her icy kiss paused on my neck
Satisfying Her hunger She bit deep
Seducting me further into Her trance
In the pale moonlight I watched Her dance
She had the power to capture thee
My heart was but a part of Her plea
For thou art not what thy plead
But guilty of stealing my innocence
Enchanted by this mystery
Of a Gothic Princess who disappeared
She cut into my heart with Her charm
Yet She brings me to no harm
Disturbing desire to revive my Love.
Copyright ©
Queen_Dolly
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2004-04-13 17:54:55]
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Re: Kleptomaniac.. For She Stole My Heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 06:09:34 PM AEST
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GREAT poem! i loved it. :o) I especially liked: "She licked it off and left the rest
Her icy kiss paused on my neck
Satisfying Her hunger She bit deep" brilliant writing. Keep it up.
-WWD
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Re: Kleptomaniac.. For She Stole My Heart
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:24:37 PM AEST
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Very good work here. I luv your title.
keep up the good work.
luv, huggs, peace, joy,
emy |
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Re: Kleptomaniac.. For She Stole My Heart
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:41:33 PM AEST
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| love this poem...i agree...i think the title is brilliant |
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Re: Kleptomaniac.. For She Stole My Heart
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:19:21 AM AEST
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wow this poems great. I love the way that you create the imagry of the poem in my mind.
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Re: Kleptomaniac.. For She Stole My Heart
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:45:26 PM AEST
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Great Title...vivid imagery.... Overall...good write...
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Re: Kleptomaniac.. For She Stole My Heart
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by venkat on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:48:02 AM AEST
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| Aah..wonderful imagination..chillingly beautiful romance. great write. I am also planning for such a new poem. venkat |
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