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A Heartless Fool
Contributed by
funny_pants
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:41:07 PM in AEST
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A heartless foe
I'd like to cry
A fool, tis so
I always lie
I would not know
the feelings die
which way to go
it makes me sigh
Let's make a deal
I know whats right
we shall not feel
It's out of sight
if i could steal
all a fight
It'd make a meal
I need to write
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2004-04-13 17:41:07]
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Re: A Heartless Fool
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by Queen_Dolly on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:44:31 PM AEST
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Nice write, great flow =)
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Re: A Heartless Fool
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 06:08:37 PM AEST
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curious write... seems like tangent thoughts coming in one atop the other, good write! ;0)
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