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Another Can
Contributed by
parkman
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:30:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You set me on fire, a burning so intense
Breaking through the barrier, I let down my defence
You’re in so deep, I’ve lost all control
Over my mind, my body and soul
I shake just at your sight, quiver at your touch
I want and need you, oh so much
To feel you inside me, warming and caressing
Floating on air, no feeling or suppressing
Say you’ll never leave, you’ll always be mine
My lovely ruby, red, red wine
My love for you, will never stale
My dark sweet, bottle of ale
As long as you are here, guiding me
From my demons, I am free
They can’t hurt me, I’m a strong man
Nothing can hurt me, I open another can
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parkman
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2004-04-13 15:30:31]
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Re: Another Can
(User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 08:26:37 PM AEST
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a graphic depiction of alcoholism - well written
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Re: Another Can
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by Justalady on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:38:49 AM AEST
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| What a terrible place to be. Words discribe the pain and hopelessness that comes from a dreaded disease. Well wrote. June |
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Re: Another Can
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by Randibee85 on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:08:27 PM AEST
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| Wow, that's very well done... Alcoholism in your words is golden when drawn out. Keep it up! |
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