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Awake
Contributed by
cheech
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:26:25 PM in AEST
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sleeping in your own bed alone without her
you'll never talk to her even if you guys are in the same room,remember that day 13 years ago march 2,i sure do,i hate you,i miss you
my feelings for you have disapeared,i'll never
forget and i'll never foregive,look at what you have accomplished,nothing,you have no family we hate you
i'm awake all night by myself thinking about if things were different,i doubt they would be better,awake all alone in your bed,i doubt you miss us,i know that you don't
march 2,13 years ago i was only 3 at the time,but i remember like it was yesturday,you were angry and full of violence,you told us you were going to the store
we checked your room the next day and everything was gone the only thing you left us was a coloured tv and an evicyion noticed,thank-you so much that was generous,i hate you!
i'm awake all night by myself thinking about if things were different,i doubt they would be better,awake all alone in your bed,i doubt you miss us,i know that you don't
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Re: Awake
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:57:41 PM AEST
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This is so sad, I feel for ya!! I too had a father that wasn't there.My advice is don't dwell on it to much. He is the one that must face his conscience and he will....
That was a wonderful write. |
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Re: Awake
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by badlander on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:02:11 AM AEST
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This was a great write for me. Emotional, raw,to the point. Ever heard the expression"you got it coming"?? It's not an expression, it's a guarantee.
tony |
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