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Wake up
Contributed by
SAT
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:19:40 PM in AEST
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she's bleeding as she is staring up
while everything slowly fades
reality is telling her
that she can't go back
and cant take it all away
what's done is done
water under the bridge
never to be reclaimed
no way to know
if you will ever see it again
almost like a secret
passed from person to person
said and changed a million times
by the time you hear it
you dont know if it's yours
or just another rumor or something
and no one really knows
and no one can find out
because its all gone now
along with her life
and all her memories
her personality too
and her love for you
and because you weren't there
she can't ever love you again
Copyright ©
SAT
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2004-04-13 15:19:40]
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Re: Wake up
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by cheech on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:36:17 PM AEST
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~wow~very well written,i feel a story going on here between ur friend and a guy who she loves or atleast did love,it is always nice to read peoms like this,awsome work
cheech
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Re: Wake up
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:52:03 PM AEST
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| Well done ,I enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: Wake up
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:47:54 PM AEST
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Great poem... Something allot of people can relate to im sure. Brilliant writing.
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Re: Wake up
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:36:39 AM AEST
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How many times have I wished to go back to "unsay" or undo something? Countless times. Yet still the fact is there: it was done. All you can do is keep on going and try to fix what you done.
Sorry. Kind of got carried away there.
Take care and keep on writing!
David |
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