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Through the rain
Contributed by
luckycharm
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:08:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel like I failed,
Because I'm so scared,
To tell you how,
I feel inside,
Sometimes I get mad at you,
And I begin to cry,
I begin to feel heart broken,
My mind will lose control,
And things will never be the same,
I try to forget about you,
But everytime I do,
I see you in my dreams,
And it's like your,
Reaching to grab my hands,
But sometimes I don't,
Wan't you,
Cause I feel I may,
Be hurt by the one I love,
Sometimes I fear,
That you may leave me,
Here in the cold,
And forget about me,
I just wan't to love you,
But I don't wan't,
To end up losing you,
Ever in my life,
I just need the one above,
To help heal my heart,
And help me make it,
Through the rain
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luckycharm
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2004-04-13 15:08:33]
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Re: Through the rain
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:28:08 PM AEST
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I liked.
It sounds like you still haven't made up your mind about this person yet...
Something like that.
Nicely done though.
Somewhat sad yet, almost hopeful. |
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Re: Through the rain
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:44:19 PM AEST
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Sweet :) And well written
Lindsey |
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Re: Through the rain
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by eviegirl on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:49:48 AM AEST
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| Yet another familar feeling. keep writing, you have great talent for it |
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