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The Pretentious
Contributed by
GeorgeJamesDelgado
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:50:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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They don their masks of pretentiousness.
Pretend to care for you, and who really
hide their hateful hearts.
Bad hearts, dead souls.
The pretentious, who seek to be kings.
No compassion, no understanding.
Their hate is outstanding to innocent shadows.
The face of Dorian Grey, do they wear!
I swear, they know no shame.
Everyday is the same; no shame, no shame!
Too late to change. It's an art with them.
The suffering that they cause!
They'll pause at Heaven's gate;
Too late! They'll slide towards oblivion.
But remember...
It was their choice!
Copyright ©
GeorgeJamesDelgado
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2004-04-13 13:50:10]
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Re: The Pretentious
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by LiquidChaos on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:38:18 PM AEST
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ah yes. so true so true, and sad as well. people like this only cause pain. awesome write! keep it up!
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Re: The Pretentious
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:52:03 PM AEST
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Erg, good writing... though I hope the frustration doesn't linger around forever!
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Re: The Pretentious
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:12:16 PM AEST
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Wow this was a angry one eh? I bet it feels better now thats it's out on paper.
Intersting write.
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