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A Lost Soul
Contributed by
Tiny_mo
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:06:01 PM in AEST
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oops
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I see some trees,
I see some grass.
Where does it lead me?
No one to ask.
I hear a heart beat,
Drumming out a beautiful tune.
So silent, so beautiful,
The world must know.
Suddenly the tune changes,
As the grass fades away.
The trees disappear,
The forest is no where near.
Where am I?
Can anyone see or hear me?
Someone please talk to me,
Someone please listen to me.
I have lost myself in this great
world of humanity.
How can I find myself,
When there is no happines around me.
All I ask for is something special,
Something that won't fade away.
Something such as...
Love and Care.
Copyright ©
Tiny_mo
... [
2004-04-13 13:06:01]
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Re: A Lost Soul
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:31:20 PM AEST
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| Moving Poem, I liked it much. Your answer is always answered, just know the question first. Is it love and the affection or just attention needed. Good luck and keep writing. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: A Lost Soul
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:27:32 PM AEST
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ah well, such life themes we can only hope for... but this is beautiful! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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