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Empty Liberation

Contributed by emphaticplacebo on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:17:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



On the outside I appear somewhat normal
An unwilling poster-child for conformity
Yet another pasty face in a faceless crowd
But what burns inside is slowly killing me

What lurks within is a disease no pill can cure
What eats me from the inside, I cannot heal
The only physical evidence is scars on my wrists
Destructive signs of the emotional pain I feel

I feel empty, like a lifeless, soulless vessel
I know I can stop the pain, there’s only one way
I close my eyes and visualise life without pain
And it is beautiful. And I know I cannot stay

My bullets; metallic tickets to a life without pain
My pistol; a passport to an existence free of sorrow
I shed a tear, knowing that I am leaving a lot behind
But I know I cannot live through another tomorrow

My temple tastes the cold iron of the pistol’s chamber
I pull the hammer back with a single resonating click
I feel my fingers embrace the gun’s unforgiving trigger
And with one tug, life’s candle reaches the end of its wick




Copyright © emphaticplacebo ... [ 2004-04-13 12:17:12]
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Re: Empty Liberation (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:59:50 PM AEST
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so sad, dont do it..i like that last line. makes the poem more powerful. i can really relate to this. hope things get better for you soon. *hugs* phil xxx


Re: Empty Liberation (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:41:05 PM AEST
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wow. what vivid imagery. this is the kind of poem that reaches out and grabs you by your heartstrings. i know because i've been there. all i can say to you is that things will get better, as much as it might anger you to hear. hold on! keep writing!

addie


Re: Empty Liberation (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:38:49 AM AEST
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wow i really "enjoyed" reading that. its so sad.




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