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Goodbye

Contributed by crash on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:28:42 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Lost in love
chasing you
you said it once
"I love you too"
but how long
were these words true?
for a month now
I'm without you

I feel as tho I am lost
broken and torn
Wandering along
waiting to be reborn

But I don't want
to do this much more
my heart broken
by a dumb whore

I will end this problem
say goodbye
All i need
is to die
this is my last work,
damn you!!! goodbye




Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-04-13 11:28:42]
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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:39:23 AM AEST
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I sincerely hope the last two lines aren't true.
I was in your position about a month ago.
I felt like there was no meaning to life anymore, and that I should just give it all up.
All because of some stupid player.
I was almost reduced to cutting again.
Thankfully I stopped myself.
Please think carefully about what you do.
I know at the moment things seem like they could never possibly improve.
But believe me, give it time and your broken heart will heal.
Best of luck.

Queen_Dolly


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:34:38 PM AEST
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this poem is is so sad but like queen dolly i really hope that the end is not true...it's a terribly scary place to be...in the cluthes of sorrow...everything seems so hopeless...but believe me you will heal...i know right now it doesn't seem that way but you do have so much going for you...you have an incredible talent...don't forget that


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Alli on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:44:34 PM AEST
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Love can be the best thing in the world, and the worst thing, all at the same time. But trust me, no girl is worth ending your life over, especially when there are so many more girls out there who would treat you right. Hang in there, one day at a time. The poem is simple, but says a lot, very well written and organized. Keep writing, it can be a great way to relieve frustration.


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:15:03 PM AEST
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Some players like to linger, needing a last word. They lie and want the world to see them as a victim, but we know better. Say goodbye to the player, and know your better off. Much better awaits to be found who will match you point for point. Great Poem, made me think of my situation and the players I've met. Keep up the great writes. Thanks for sharing.


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:46:04 PM AEST
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i also hope the last lines arn't true. dont let them get you down, i have been here too (seems like alot of people have) but dont let them beat you down. be strong. good write *hugs* phil xxx


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:25:35 PM AEST
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I hope the last lines arent true and thats how you feel noone is worth taking away yourself so move on to brighter days and its spring time to not only clean the house but get rid of people who drag you down and arent worthy of your love.
michelle


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:30:28 PM AEST
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i loved it...........it flowed so beautifuly, i could imagine it in my morbid twisted mind........keep it up.....
**vamp**




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