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Violently Angry.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:58:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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YOU CAN THINK THIS IS BAD, BUT ITS NOTHING IN COMPARISON TO WHAT HIM AND HIS MATES HAVE DONE YOU US.
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I was scared to hit you,
even though i was not.
i pulled back your hair,
and punched you in the gut!
i kept hitting and punching you,
you couldn't move!
your hair was so firmly in my grip,
you must have known you'd lose.
see what you don't know,
is that i don't take 'no ****''.
from boys like you,
giving out it!
when i'd had enough,
i let go.
you spun round,
tried to ram your fist,
down my throat.
missed though!
i grabbed you again,
feeling my cheeks, go flaming red!
i pulled back your head,
with my fingers dead,
punched, hit, and kicked you again!
you struggled to move, but you couldn't win!
and that was when,
my older sister stepped in!
she held you hard,
by the scruff of your neck!
i was still holding you by the hair on your head.
she told you, not to show,
your, pe**s! again,
and if you did, then you'd be dead!
you said you didn't,
when you and your mates did!
she said this.
your mates were in front, not far away.
but they had run when my hand,
had hit your brain!
... so clare hit you, because you denied it!
you play with lives,
love the ride of it...
i knew you were scared.
your eyes said it all.
i wanted to wham! you the nuts,
but i didn't, coz that would be cruel.
clare walked away,
i let go,
you ran round the corner,
towards your home.
i haven't seen you today.
you're hidding away.
you're all pathetic cowards!
but i don't feel great,
to know that you're scared of me.
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deathdrop
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2004-04-13 09:58:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Violently Angry.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Thivanka on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:47:28 AM AEST (User
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This is great, straight from the heart. I loved it from begining to end. Thanks for sharing!
-Thivanka |
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Re: Violently Angry.
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:13:00 AM AEST (User
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whoa, powerful!
glad to see you kicked the sh*t out of him lol
nicely written. i really enjoyed it.
well done.
Arden |
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