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I Love You...But
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 09:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I need to talk to you,
But I can’t.
I’d keep it all inside of me,
But I’m spent.
I need to show you how I feel,
But I won’t.
I know now that it’s you I love,
But you don’t.
I want to say it all out loud,
But I write.
I try to hide it all away,
But in sight.
I know you are the way for me,
But the cost.
I thought I could ignore my heart,
But I lost.
In real life I’m missing you,
But I dream.
I keep silent all the time,
But I scream.
I’m happy when I’m here with you,
But I cry.
I don’t know now what will get me through,
But I try.
I know it’s not me that you want,
But I hope.
This secret is so hard to bare,
But I cope.
Each night I feel you in my arms,
But I wake.
I pretend there’s nothing there,
But I fake.
I think it’s time I’m telling you,
But I’m afraid.
I don’t know if you can feel it too,
But I prayed.
This world it threatens to push me down,
But I shove
I know that honestly you may not see it,
But I love.
By: Doug Morton
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Re: I Love You...But
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 02:12:10 PM AEST
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I thought it was beautiful and I'm glad you decided to share it with us. And yes, it is poetic, but anything that comes from the heart is poetic and this obviously did. Keep writing.
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Re: I Love You...But
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by aernby on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 08:30:39 PM AEST
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YES ! ! !
I know that feeling, I've been there!
good write!
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Re: I Love You...But
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by Lia on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 12:20:58 AM AEST
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| Hey ya Doug hon...ya know...if you erase the word 'but' from everyline in this poem...it doesn't look quite so hard anymore :)...good luck to you! |
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Re: I Love You...But
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 02:33:25 AM AEST
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Wow..this is absolutely beautiful!!!
I simply love it.
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Re: I Love You...But
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by orgygirl on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 09:34:01 AM AEST
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Wow this piece really spoke to me. This is very deep.... I love it.]
Take care
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