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Why Must I?
Contributed by
solmyr1404
on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:10:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Why
Must I
Love you still,
Though you
Aren't here?
Why
Must I
Love you still,
Though I cannot
Touch your face?
Why
Must I
Love you still,
Though I can't
Hold You close?
Why
Must I
Love you still,
And keep you in my heart,
Though I'm vanquished from yours?
Why
Must I?
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solmyr1404
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2004-04-13 03:10:51]
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Re: Why Must I?
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by Queen_Dolly on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:44:40 AM AEST
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I've asked myself these questions so many times.
Beautiful and easy to relate to =)
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Re: Why Must I?
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by Jacktripper on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:15:14 AM AEST
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| A great vison of reality in a poetic content. You deliver your pain "why must I" and your feeling about it. The last line is the best "though I'm vanquished from yours". Then the closer "why must I" Very well done you could stretch the story line with intimate episodes and continue the referral why must I. It's only because we want to hear more and try to relate your pain with our own pain. Great write very well done. |
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Re: Why Must I?
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by Ravisada on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:37:43 AM AEST
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SIMPLE AND NICE POEM
GOOD WORK |
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Re: Why Must I?
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:02:51 AM AEST
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I Relate To This Poem Very Well... Great Write... I've Asked Myself Several Of These Questions Over And Over Again.
*********LoVe**AnGeL***********
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Re: Why Must I?
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 01:10:03 PM AEST
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ur poetry is so sad. i would really like to talk to u. about anything. i wouldn't care. just to talk to u. and try to help.
this is a good poem. nicely writen. even though it is sad.
as always i'm here if u wanna talk.
~allyson~ |
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